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Re: Romance Suggestions
I'm a big historical fiction fan, so I love all of Philippa Gregory's books. The Other Boleyn Girl is simply phenomenal. This book was amazing! I seriously recommend it also. ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: That Voice
Wow, I really liked this! To be perfectly honest it reminded me of all the imaginary friends I had growing up, although I will admit that none of them could ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Shadow Box Prologue
Everyone else who reviewed already has pointed out everything I was going to, so my review will be rather short. I did like what I read, but I agree with ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: The Place
It was definitely interesting. I've never read anything like it before. But, it was also very confusing. When you started out, it felt like there was a character and they ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: .
I have everything that Tamora Pierce has every written. I was even fortunate enough to meet her and get some of my books signed, but she hasn't been back to ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Rain
I'm with Livin_Life_214-the flesh of a story is the description. While you shouldn't go overboard, you still want to give a clear picture on what's happening. Where are the characters, ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: The Vampires Kiss (Chapter 1)
This might sound odd, but if I were in your shoes, I would try wooing your readers. Not in a Stephanie Meyer way, because to be frank her books gave ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: He's not quite ready
It definitely was not bad for your first shot, not bad at all. Believe it or not, romantic scenes aren't the easiest thing to write. A lot is going on, ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Unspoken Words - Chapter one
The beginning was kind of a rush, you really didn't waste any time just jumping in with the character of Jeff. Will there be more of an explanation of what ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: the wolf mystery
The whole thing felt very rushed, which is an effect you can give in an effective way without being choppy. I would take a couple of minutes and tell us ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: your opinion please (poll included)
1. Does this make you want to read more? It certainly was intriguing. The part that grabbed my attention was the very last sentence, I can say for sure, I ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Darkness and Light
It's very vague. That's not a bad thing if you plan to start out using this scene as an introduction, but I definitely encourage you to add a little bit ...
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Historical Fiction
I would definitely try Phillipa Gregory. She is the author of The Other Bolyen Girl which was fabulous. The movie, not so much. But she is a fantastic writer, I ...
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: Anne Rice?
I would definitely have to agree with the fact that Anne Rice is a better writer. If only because she actually knew her characters. The way she wrote may have ...
Nov 10, 2008 -
Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse
The Twilight Saga definitely was not one of my favorites. I read the first one, because I was on a vampire spree-I had just read some Anne Rice, and I ...
Nov 10, 2008
